In the spring ,a season Which we are learning new rhythms of life, Many of us find comfort in the natural world.有错吗？

有一些错误。正确的应该是： "In spring, a season during which we are learning new rhythms of life, many of us find comfort in the natural world." 修改说明： 1. "Which" 应该改为 "during which"，因为这里需要用一个介词短语来修饰 "a season"。 2. "the nature world" 应该改为 "the natural world"。 3. "find a comfort" 应该改为 "find comfort"。 4. 句子开头的大写字母 "M" 应该改为小写字母 "m"。